2020年全國新東方在線英語寫作培訓范文（寫作提高方法）
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A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.
題型：呼吁題
論點：一邊倒(同意)
論證角度：利弊分析
開頭：同意政府應該把財政預算更多地放在環保上。(話題引入+雙方觀點呈現+我方觀點及過渡句)
The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is booming. Modern skyscrapers, convenient communications, fast transportations make it easier and cozier for people to live in this planet. However, people are beginning to realize that the great achievements today seem to be at the price of destroying the nature. They claim that governments should focus its budgets more on environment than on economic development. As for me, I am a big fan of environmental protection and I am wholeheartedly in agreement with this claim. Here are some reasons and examples to support my view.
中間段1：環境保護關系到每一個人的健康問題。(主題句+解釋+細節化展開)
First, the environmental protection is closely bound up with the health of every single person in this world. If the environment is polluted, the basic elements people need to survive must be affected, and thus disastrous results may occur. Recently I have read an appalling fact from newspapers that there is a village in the center of China where the majority of its residents, including kids and seniors, suffer from cancer such as lung cancer, stomach cancer and lymph cancer. The investigator found that the villagers’ drinking water is from a river that is severely contaminated by the industrial discharges of enterprises located at the upstream.
中間段2：經濟的可持續發展需要以環境保護為前提，我們不能竭澤而漁。(主題句+解釋+細節和展開)
In addition, the environmental protection is conducive to the sustainability of economic development. There are some idioms in China, “killing the hens for the egg”, “draining the pond for the fish”, and “burning the woods for the prey”. These ancient wisdoms warn modern people not to gain profits at present without thinking of the future. In other words, we cannot simply satisfy the need of contemporary people regardless of the interest of our next generation. Imagine that if we were in excessive pursuit of economic development by consuming all the natural resources, hunting for precious animals mercilessly and cut down forests, what will become of our descendants?
中間段3：環境保護可以在一定程度上刺激經濟的發展，比如可以發展旅游業。(主題句+解釋+細節展開)
Last but not least, the environmental protection can boost the development of economy at the same time. For instance, a country that emphasizes on its environment must be a country famous for its sightseeing industry. I have been to Singapore in which I am not only amazed by its prosperous economy but also by its garden-like environment. The lawns, the trees, the rivers are beautifully designed to fit into the city. This case well illustrates that the economic development and environmental protection sometimes construct no conflicts between each other.
結尾：重申觀點+歸納理由/升化主題。
To put it into nutshell, governments should put its budgets on environmental protection than on economic development. In the process of achieving more prosperous economy, people should sometimes stop to think about whether the world we live could provide fresh air, clean water and healthy food, for these are fundamentally vital to the fate of human beings.
提高英語寫作的方法如下：
分三個步驟，第一步：以譯促寫。找一篇英文范文，把它翻譯成漢語，然后對照漢語，自己把它翻譯成英語。最后，將自己翻譯的英語與最初的范文進行對比，尋找差距。在這個比較和批注的過程中不斷完善提高英語寫作。并且學習范文中地道的表達。
第二步：將自己的翻譯與范文靜心地思考并找出譯文和范文的差異。學習范文文本的起承轉合的技巧，學習范文文本長句短句的錯落交叉，學習范文文本的精確用詞。
第三步：背誦范文。不可以直接背，一定要在做了上面第一二步后再背誦。
以上三個步驟是學習英語寫作的基本方法。在學習完一篇文章后還要精細的做文章分析工作。這樣才能有效的提高寫作能力。
2020年全國新東方在線英語寫作培訓范文（寫作提高方法）。寫作的過程一定要積累表達精準的詞匯，然后慢慢提高自己寫作的用詞準確性。這樣寫作的文章才會變得高級起來。
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